{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"3038513","dateCreated":"1204310517","smartDate":"Feb 29, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"hokamura","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/hokamura","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sonnenallee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/3038513"},"dateDigested":1532091875,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Peer Review","description":"Your site is very imformative. Great job!! The idea is clear and stated well. Sentence structures are easy to follow. I can understand the contents, but a short glossary might be helpful. <br \/>\nThe style is coherent. If you can state how the Vorhang was understood by people of our age back then in clearer sentence, it will be great!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"3038543","body":"I highlighted some grammatical errors!","dateCreated":"1204310591","smartDate":"Feb 29, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"hokamura","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/hokamura","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"3037035","dateCreated":"1204306710","smartDate":"Feb 29, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"JamesDCLong","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/JamesDCLong","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sonnenallee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/3037035"},"dateDigested":1532091875,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"DeVorhang","description":"Content<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall your article is very informative without going into confusing detail. You could go more into the reasons behind why the wall was built. Also, how do people today feel about the wall ever having been built? (i.e. necessary or horrible disaster) Donna recently gave a EDW on a politician that said it was necessary and was ousted she could probably link for you. The section on the youths feelings was very good.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOrganization<br \/>\n<br \/>\nSeperating your paragraphs and giving them titles instead of numbers would make your article much easier to follow. Good explanation throughout on why the term DEV stuck. You could use a little more cause on the wall being built and cause\/effect on the wall falling.  Your writing flowed from thought to thought logically which made it easy to follow.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"3028705","dateCreated":"1204259397","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"dhill18","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dhill18","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sonnenallee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/3028705"},"dateDigested":1532091875,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"review","description":"You define the topic and give a history of it. Mabey work on the orginazition a bit. You use varied sentence forms. I would add a glossary, give peoples' opinion, and add a little more to the history.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}