{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"3038933","dateCreated":"1204311651","smartDate":"Feb 29, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"lizmee","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/lizmee","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sonnenallee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/3038933"},"dateDigested":1532091872,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"review","description":"The detailed glossary definitely helps one know what is going on, but would it be possible to simplify and use more words we know. This would help it flow better. The organization is simple and straight forward, so other than the tons of vocab words, it is easy to read.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"3025563","dateCreated":"1204248935","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"wcamp111","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/wcamp111","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sonnenallee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/3025563"},"dateDigested":1532091872,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"peer review","description":"You have a lot of good information. You may want to include some more information on the origins of existentialism (that existentialists were responding to the unbelievable horrors of the Second World War by declaring themselves almost 'outside history' and taking only responsibility for themselves). Format-wise, the page is a bit hard to read and runs together. Division into topics and some spacing would definitely help.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"3008987","dateCreated":"1204204384","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"Uschi87","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Uschi87","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sonnenallee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/3008987"},"dateDigested":1532091872,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Peer Edit.","description":"Good transitions.
\nTry to either link or anchor the new vocab to make it moter User friendly. Also, make the page a little more user friendly with with more headings and pictures put in the content, could anchor to bibliography and outline.
\nLast paragraph was a little long could work on breaking it up.
\nNice glossary of new vocab. Seemed to have good content.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}