{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"3025303","dateCreated":"1204248341","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"wcamp111","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/wcamp111","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sonnenallee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/3025303"},"dateDigested":1532091849,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"peer review","description":"Good amount of information.  You may want to double check some verb use ('gendet' --> beendet) and make sure that verbs are in the second position in sentences.  It may help to divide up information by topic rather than by who wrote the info to make things flow more smoothly.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"3021175","dateCreated":"1204237106","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"ssoma","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ssoma","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sonnenallee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/3021175"},"dateDigested":1532091849,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Peer Review","description":"Interesting paper about the Potsdam Conference.  I felt it was relatively easy to read and covered the topics necessary to be covered. There are several times when facts are repeated, which can be omitted.  Also, a few pointers.  I noticed some misspellings(endetetet, gang, gendet) and occasions when hat ---> end (weil Gro\u00dfbritannien hat ihn Prime Minister gew\u00e4hlt.) Lastly, word choice, might look at using dauert instead of ging in certain circumstances. Just some tips.  Overall, interesting and good paper, just watch out for typos!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"3017669","dateCreated":"1204227745","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"jwaits","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jwaits","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sonnenallee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/3017669"},"dateDigested":1532091849,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Peer Review","description":"Your group provides a lot of good information about the Potsdamer Konferenz.  However, the detail became a distraction as I continued to read.  You have all the information you need, but it reached the point where I felt like I was attending a very long and tedious history lecture, in German.  The good thing is that I don't have anything that I can suggest you should add, just go through and take out smaller details that may not be as important.  Phrases such as "Churchill und Truman vertrauten Stalin nicht. Churchill hatte der gr\u00f6\u00dften Verdacht Stalin. Truman hatte auch Verdacht f\u00fcr Stalin" are redundant.  Overall though it is well written and informative.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"3017225","dateCreated":"1204226980","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"abelfor","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/abelfor","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sonnenallee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/3017225"},"dateDigested":1532091850,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Peer Review","description":"Overall, good information and detail about the Potsdamer Konferenz. However, it would help to include the title of each sections written, i.e. Geschichte, etc to help facilitate with what the reader is reading. Also, although detail is helpful, it seems a little verbose and could be shorter and broader so as to not confuse a first time reader of this topic. More definitions could be provided as well. Good use of links to provide additional information to the reader.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"2767611","dateCreated":"1202918591","smartDate":"Feb 13, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"DPickles","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/DPickles","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sonnenallee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/2767611"},"dateDigested":1532091850,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Gruppeversammlung","description":"Ich weiss es ist am Sonstagabend, und es ist um 7 Uhr, aber wo ist die Versammlung?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}