{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"3022595","dateCreated":"1204241150","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"hrader","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/hrader","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sonnenallee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/3022595"},"dateDigested":1532091829,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Peer Review","description":"The content is thorough and easy to understand. I didn't read too much about the significance today\/past you may want to include a little more. The organization was really well done. The only suggestion I have is maybe add a few more words to the glossary like betrogen and beherrschend. Overall the essay is really good.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"3016807","dateCreated":"1204226123","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"whembree","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/whembree","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sonnenallee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/3016807"},"dateDigested":1532091830,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Peer Review (with respect to worksheet)","description":"Group Stasi,<br \/>\n<br \/>\n  Your page was very informative, concise, and to the point.  There is enough information without being too overwhelming.  I was glad to see you mentioned the film Das Leben der Anderen; this is where my suggestion comes in.  Perhaps you could mention how the Stasi monitored the writer in the film.  If you haven't seen the film, you could mention how the Stasi would go about monitoring a suspected person.  If I had never heard of the Stasi before, it would certainly help me to form a stronger mental image of what they were, i.e. an abuse of government.  <br \/>\n  In terms of your organization I don't really have too much to say.  I'm not sure if Dr. Arnold wants the paper to be like a typical English essay... If she is, you might want to get rid of the topic headings you have, and include transition sentences, internal summaries,... (e.g. Let us take a brief look at the history of the Stasi, Now that we've taken a brief look at history, let us now move on to how people our age might have viewed the Stasi during this time period,...)  Again, what you have is very good, but I'm not exactly sure what Dr. Arnold wants here.  Just something to think about...<br \/>\n  With regard to your language and style, I was very comfortable reading your information.  I think it would be a good idea to touch up your glossary though.  I would like to see it divided into Nouns, Verbs, and Adjectives; writing it in alphabetical order would be a good idea as well (within each section).  As it is now, I'm assuming it's in order with respect to your paper.  I wasn't wild about scanning around without any form of apparent order.<br \/>\n  I really liked the pictures and the graphs that you included as well.  Perhaps you could try to squeeze a few of those pictures on your page?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}